Annikin is sent to the Academy to secure the princess. When the wounded Clieg Whitsun, one of the spies from Alderaan, arrives to warn the Aquilaeans of the Empire's plans of conquest, a decision is quickly made to resist. Kane goes to Gordon, a seedy starport, to meet with his friend Han Solo, a Ureallian. The king leaves for Amsel to meet with his Senate and determine whether to go to war with the Empire. Not long after princess Leia, Kayos's daughter, leaves for Yuell to study at the Chatos Academy, a huge space fortress enters the Aquilaean system.
Because of this, he believes that he cannot adequately train his remaining son, and asks Skywalker to train him as a padawaan learner. Kane reveals to his friend the extent of his cybernetic replacements-only his head and arm remain flesh. Kane reunites with a fellow Jedi, Luke Skywalker, now a General in the Aquilaean military. Meanwhile, Kane and Annikin arrive at Aquilae and contact the royal government at their Underground Fortress. Spies on Alderaan, the gas giant capital of the Empire, leave to bring news of this to Aquilae's leadership. Unfortunately, even as the Jedi arrive in system, the Galactic Emperor, Cos Dashit, plots with his advisors to annex it, one of the last of the Independent Systems. Aquilae, a planet not yet controlled by the Empire, is ruled by the wise King Kayos and Queen Breha. It is clear that the exiles must flee the Kessil system and they leave for their homeworld of Aquilae. Their foe is no match, however, for a Jedi Master, and Kane avenges his apprentice. The Jedi and his sons go to investigate, but the Sith gets a jump on them, killing Deak with a single blow. Their seclusion from the forces of the Galactic Empire is interrupted by the arrival of a Sith flying a Banta Four starfighter. The Jedi Kane Starkiller and his two sons, Deak and Annikin Starkiller, live on the Fourth Moon of Utapau. So hopefully all of these things will help you in that drafting process and get you to that final draft a little bit easier.To the farthest reaches of the GREAT RIFT. Really open your ears to what they are saying. Ultimately, you make the final choices when it comes to your writing. So, welcome feedback, ask people to look at it, but don't get angry if they say things that you don't agree with. And then finally, welcome the feedback from everybody but remember, you're the writer. It's amazing what it'll do for you to take maybe a day away from a paper, and then sit down, go back to it and look at it with fresh eyes. My other advise is take breaks and that's another reason why I say give yourself some time in the drafting process. So it's always nice to get that feedback. When somebody else reads it and it's not very clear at all. Often times we get so in our papers that we think we're being clear. It's going to give you an idea of what it is that you're communicating. Not just your teacher, not just you, but asking a friend, asking a parent, asking a different teacher who didn't assign it, to look at it. So, in the drafting process, and hopefully you'll have multiple draft, it's always good to get multiple different people to look at it. That brings me to getting a different set of eyes on your papers. And sometimes the best thing to do, is to just skip over it, keep going with something else and then come back to it with some fresh eye.
#Rough draft vs final draft how to
When it comes to drafting, I definitely advise sitting down more than the night before papers do, because sometimes you will get stuck on your hook for your introduction, or maybe how to analyze a particular quote.
If you get stuck, move on and come back later, and this is really important. So writing it shouldn't be the hard work. You won't believe how many students do their outline, they plan everything out and then they sit down at their computer and say, "I don't know what to write here." And then I have to remind them, "Get out that outline." That is all the thinking that goes into your essay. The other thing I have remind my students is, remember your outline. You can go back to it and you can pair things back later. But if your page limit is three pages and your rough draft is four, let it go. Of course, you don't want to write a 20 page rough draft, if your page limit is three pages. The first is, don't worry about length, at least not too much. There are some things I tell my students to keep in mind, when they sit down to actually draft. Now I know that sometimes it's hard because you do your outline, you prep your thesis statement, you've done all this thinking that goes into it, and then your teacher probably just says right.
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